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A Single Moments Ecstasy by ~dakkon:icondakkon:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open




The air is electrically charged
As explosions of light and fire illuminate the sky.
The faces of the many tilt skyward
And are completely consumed by the spectacle,
But here we are
Face to face as time stands still
Enveloped in a single moment\'s ecstasy.

And as our lips press tightly together
We whisper passionately the secrets
That we have never been able to put into words.

The moment finally passes
As we become lost in each other
And the whole world spins without us.
But I need not watch the night sky turn into day
For the magics of man
Could never compare
To the miracles I\'ve seen within your eyes.
©2003-2009 ~dakkon
:icondakkon:

Author's Comments

The least I could do for the reawakening of a feeling that had been dead in me for the longest time. oh and Happy 4th of July 2003 America!!!

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~alwayzdazd Jul 5, 2003, 2:38:54 AM
I hope this is real..you deserve it, and awesome descriptions.....beautiful work.
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~skape7 Jul 5, 2003, 3:05:38 PM
Clap As usual, you astound me with your wonderful imagery.Clap

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"The poet's business is not to save the soul of man, but to make it worth saving" -James Elroy Flecker

"DREAM..CREATE..BELIEVE"-skape7

I have sold my soul to...
:icondark-writing::iconlivingp oetsociety::iconbevelled-edge:
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~phobiald Jul 7, 2003, 10:33:13 PM
Wow. Speechless dakk, amazingly good and quite romantic work. I can see you're getting into the "luvvy-duvvy vibe" :) (Smile) But all in all, astonishing pieces lately. +fav buddy !! Keep it up!
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~syphix Jul 8, 2003, 1:25:44 AM
Sorry about the comment above, that was actually me, i was just signed in as my friend's name for a second. But really, truly, amazing work. Such a good portrayal of being bewildered amongst another's presence. Love can drive one into such a trance where he/she feels nothing in the world means more than that of the shiny flashes in the sky! :) (Smile) Clap
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=kagrmom Jul 8, 2003, 6:49:25 AM
I was there with you for that moment. It was very beautiful!!
You make the world light up with your verses!!

AND thank you for your sweet comments on SPICE HOUSE! You made my morning!! Hug

--
mari



A man's home is his castle.....let him clean it........anon
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~lizel Jul 9, 2003, 2:54:07 AM
I really enjoyed this... Especially, "I need not watch the night sky turn into day/For the magics of man/Could never compare/To the miracles I've seen within your eyes."... Pure poetic beauty at its best....
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~icklefluffywolfy Jul 12, 2003, 3:35:03 PM
Wow! That is just so breathtakingly beautiful! *sighs deeply* Pure beautiful perfection!

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~euphoria-angel Jul 17, 2003, 6:47:28 PM
"For the magics of man
Could never compare
To the miracles I've seen within your eyes."

wow, I must say this ending is just too perfect, I love it! Thumbs Up

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:rose: Life is a rose, it's either pleasantly fragrant or painfully thorny :blackrose:
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